Sunday, March 13, 2011

Otherwise. A nice guy.

I remember I gave his mother an advice.

You just cannot manipulate him with any device

I told her not twice but thrice…he is simple but someone who likes spice

Honest from heart, kind inside. To be precise

A really nice guy but otherwise…..



A few days ago, I attended his engagement…his parents made an incorrect judgment

Though he loves the girl but then she is just She…he doesn’t mind any provocative attention as long as it’s Free

She is his but now old…he is quite bold…so he went onto see another girl…erotic feelings he could not hold

He said it was a stroke of luck,just a stroke. He did not do anything wrong,just helped a girl who was really broke (ha ha ha).

One night stand is pretty justified…I gave her lot money…he said it with a smirk eventually cheating on his honey

I was not into contradiction..it was his sheer addiction…with a gentle vice

He is a nice guy I know but otherwise…


One day I saw his father arguing with him, never saw the old man before in such a grim

A lot of cash was stolen…his room was ransacked…even the safe was broken

John love cars, girls, he likes fame…Old man was screaming at him…quite obvious is his blame.

He loves spending money in derby, a game that was introduced to him by his honey his fiancée Miss.Jane Kirby

Later he admitted… said he is a rookie… he lost all the money in derby……he was befooled by a bookie

Very clean, very clear….I must say honesty has no price

He is a genuine guy I should say but otherwise.



He has no bad habits other than drinking which he likes to get indulged in till his gait becomes swinging

Despite losing every time…likes to play poker…turns to bezique…people still call him a joker

In the same Casino at that night …he saw Miss. Kirby holding someone really tight

He could hardly talk,he could hardly walk..still went to the bar and said…give me a large…that too on the rocks!!

He turned around…shot her down…it brought end of his ugly showdown

I asked him why he did that…he replied hunk…I don’t know but I was too drunk…



Oh My God!! To my surprise ….to my horror

He said Miss. Kirby was holding him…He saw that in the mirror

How can someone be so honest?? How? I remember I gave his mother an advice.

She loves her son too much…considered him wise...

That makes me say he is honest, kind, genuine guy………….. but otherwise.

6 comments:

  1. Biblography:-

    The Narrator is subject's(John's)prime psychologist (Dr.Higgins) and a friend who portrayed John on the basis of his observation and perception.


    Bezique:- A game of cards.

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  2. Anupam I loved this one! :) Really trust me you are too good with the rhyme!! I wonder if I could ever write like that, how long did it take you to write this one.. I enjoyed reading it. I have a confession to make, this one enforced me to read between the lines and make some guesses.. but I quit! ;p and I will stick to the pure work of fiction! :)

    Keep writing! It is pure entertainment!

    Regards,
    Megha :)

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  3. Good one Bro....

    really really good.

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  4. @Megha:- Thanks alot for liking it.

    I wonder what enforced you to read b/w the lines.It took me 4 hours to complete it.I must try something else..its a kind of fictitous thriller that too second in a row.

    Thanks alot for reading Megha.

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  5. @TrojaN:- Thank you for appreciating my work.

    I would love to know about you bro.

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  6. Hey Anupam.. come on you don't have to thank me for reading it.. I love your blog and your writings! :)

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